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Tips and templates for Ielts

Tips and templates for Ielts

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

الحمد لله والصلاة والسلام على رسول الله ,,,, وبعد

هذه احبتي الكرام بعض التجارب والتوجيهات لاختبار اللغه IELTS  , طبعا حاولت قدر المستطاع ان لااذكر اي توجيه قد يجده الطالب في الكتب الخاصه بهذا الاختبار فقط عرضت التجارب التي مررت بها  وطرحت بعض النصايح والحلول وامل من الله ان تكون ذا فايدة عظيمة ,

الكتابة :

القالب سيكون بالخط الاحمر والمثال بالخط الاسود

INTRODUCTION

The diagram(s)/ figure (s)/ bar graph(s)/ line graph (s) / table(s) show(s)/demonstrate(s)/display(s)/describe(s)/ compare(s)/illustrate(s)/present(s) information about unemployment rate in the UK and US respectively in the four years from 2001 to 2004. Altogether there are … categories/areas/aspects involved, i.e.,/namely…. Overall, there was/is a substantial increase/decrease/fluctuation in (time/place/area), while … remain(s)/ed relatively steady/ during ….

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As clearly seen in the (first) bar graph(s)/ line graph (s) / table(s) / diagram(s) / figure (s),

the employment rate was the highest (lowest) in 2003 in terms of full-time jobs.

The percentage/number of part-time jobs / represented/accounted for/amounted to/ constituted /made up/was as high/low as/ approximately … per cent.

Amongst the women, it was seen/observed/witnessed that the total number of full-time jobs reached as high as 25 million in 2001.

In comparison/in contrast, in 2003 the number of part-time jobs was substantially/slightly more/less than that of 2002.

CONCLUSION

In summary, based on these graphs/diagrams, it is seen that full-time employment ranked the first, followed by casual jobs, while part-time employment remained the lowest.

INTRODUCTION:

The diagram(s)/ figure (s)/ bar graph(s)/ line graph (s) / table(s) show(s)/demonstrate(s)/display(s)/describe(s)/ compare(s)/illustrate(s)/present(s) information about unemployment rate in the UK and US respectively in the four years from 2001 to 2004. Altogether there are … categories/areas/aspects involved, i.e.,/namely…. Overall, there was/is a substantial increase/decrease/fluctuation in (time/place/area), while … remain(s)/ed relatively steady/ during ….

BODY

Compared with 2001, the year 2002 demonstrated/witnessed/experienced a sharp jump/increase/rise/ in part-time jobs.

The figure/number soared/skyrocketed/rose sharply/increased sharply in 2001.

Thefigure/number/plummeted/slumped/dropped/decreased/plunged into a trough.

During the whole period of fours years the employment rate fluctuated slightly/dramatically.

In general /overall/on the average/, the employment rate steadily/sharply rose from 2001 and peaked in 2003 and gradually decreased afterwards; the employment rate leveled off/remained steady from 2003 onwards/from 2003 to 2004; the employment rate steadily/sharply decreased/dropped/slumped from 2001 and reached the lowest point/hit a low/the lowest in 2004

Similarly/likewise, …

Different from …/ In contrast, …

 

CONCLUSION

In the whole period of four years/ employment rate was the lowest in 2001, and was on the increase from that time onward, until it reached the peak in 2004. The employment rate started to ease after 2004.

كما تلاحظون ان هذه القوالب فيها كلمات معقدة ومتقدمة لغويا  وتعطي انطباع جيد للمصحح بان الطالب يمتلك حصيلة كبيرة من المفردات ومثال على هذه الكلمات

 demonstrated/witnessed/experienced, slumped/ plummete, accounted for/amounted to/ constituted /made up, soared/skyrocketed/rose sharply

كما ان هذه القوالب مرتبة ومترابطة الاقكار لذلك ماعليك فقط هو التدرب عليها

فيما يتعلق ب task2  فهناك ثلاثة قوالب وهي تغطي غالبا جميع انماط اختبار الايلتس  , القالب الاول يستخدم اذا كان الموضوع عن ذكر مميزات وعيوب موضوع ما , والقالب الثاني اذا كان الموضوع هو عرض مشكلة وتقديم الحل , بينما القالب  الثالث هو ان تطرح وجهة نظرك عن موضوع ما والاسباب التي جعلتك تعتقد بهذا الاعتقاد .

وهذه هي القوالب والامثلة عليها

Example for  using advantages and disadvantages template

In some countrues young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this .

(Advantages and disadvantages essay template )

Introduction

In the (contemporary) society, there have been widespread discussions about whether it is helpful for students to travel or to work  before commencing university studies and various arguments have been put forward.. Indeed such debates have sometimes resulted in acrimonious or rancorous discussion .Whilst a large number of advocates may strenuously argue that taking a break from study would be definitely beneficial, their adversaries may claim otherwise .Considering the numerous arguments made, I would to some extent hold that there are both advantages and disadvantages, the most important of which are as follows.

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First and foremost, with regard to the advantages it is seen that both travelling and working will help students to enrich their experiences and widen their views .In other words, when student either work or travel  ,they can learn  enormous  skills that not only will assist student in their studies but also in their personal  life .For example , travelling will enable students to have crucial  skills such as communication , interpersonal and  language skills. All these skills will have certainly profound effects on the way students think and behave .

, …

Furthermore, the advantage of travelling or working remain that students can discover their hidden talents . This  can be implemented and applied by trying out different jobs , contacting with people from different backgrounds and participating in various activities.By doing so, students might be able to determine what career would best suit them .

One other hand , we should not be oblivious of the downsides associated  with discontinuation from education . One of which is that some student may not back to school again since working is more joyful than being a student for further years. Even if the student back to study , his/her performance in the university may adversely affected due to the suspension of the study .

Conclusion

In summary, as discussed above, the advantages of leaving school for a year primarily include gaining valuable experience  and  developing students’ skills while the disadvantages are  the negative effects on the students performance and the possibility of not completing their studies .These are the main aspects people should consider carefully when dealing with these issues in addition to other less important factors that may also be stressed.

EXAMPLE for using THE PROBLEM-SOLUTION TEMPLATE

Heavy traffic on the road has been an issue for many modern cities. What problems

are being caused by this? What solutions can you suggest?

introduction

  In the contemporary society, there have been widespread discussions about traffic related problems and various arguments have been put forward. Indeed such debates have sometimes resulted in acrimonious or rancorous discussion .Whilst a large number of people may strenuously argue that traffic has caused numerous number of problems ,other may claim otherwise .Considering the numerous arguments made, I would in general hold that heavy traffic  has resulted in a wide range of problems .The main problems as follows.

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First and foremost, Traffic congested has resulted in a wide range of problems in some cities including health related problems .In other words , city dwellers suffered and are still suffering from breath related diseases such as asthma and breathing difficulties  because of the massive amount of vehicle emissions that are produced every day .Another health problem is the horrible stress under which people live in  ,particularly when being in traffic jam .such pressure may provoke drivers into behaving in violent and  aaggressive ways.

In addition ,  heavy traffic has caused serious problems to the economy of big cities . To put it precisely , some cities even those with beautiful nature have a bad reputation due to their terrible traffic and thus people in general , tourist in particular may not travel to such cities  .This ,in turn, will exert a profound effect on the national economy either on the short or long term .

Based on the problem and the reasons that have led to these problems, the most effective and efficient way to solve the problem is to equip rural areas with the necessary infrastructure so that the demographics shift will be minimized . Besides, we can also consider encouraging people to use public transport as an appropriate solution .

Conclusion

To conclude ,given the causes and solutions discussed previously ,as long as concerted efforts are made on an international level to combat this issue ,the traffic problems will be reduced  or even eliminated completely.

Example for using template  for argumentative essays

      Rich countries should share their wealth with poor people.

Do you agree or disagree ?

There have been widespread discussions about The responsibility of rich nations toward poorer ones and various arguments have been put forward. Indeed such debates have sometimes resulted in acrimonious or rancorous discussions  .Whilst a large number of advocates may strenuously argue that poor countries should be helped and given financial aid especially when it comes to basic necessities , their adversaries may claim otherwise .Considering the numerous  arguments made, I would strongly I  hold that  as affluent societies ,we must give a hand to needy people wherever they are  My argument is supported by the following reasons.

First and foremost ,Since we are human being ,it is of vital importance  for affluent society to help and support poor people  irrespective of their background ,race or religion .In other words, there  are indeed many forms of  supporting  and subsidizing  these countries and concurrently gaining benefits .Take investments in tourism as an example ,such investments create job opportunities which enable people to work instead of depending on humanitarian aids from others .

Moreover, better off countries will be affected adversely either economically ,socially or politically as a result of bad conditions in which worse off people live . To put it precisely , if rich countries are to ensure safety and stability in their countries , they should pay more attention to and share their wealth with poor nations ,otherwise it would be difficult for rich countries  ,if not impossible , to avoid a host of poverty-related problems .For example ,USA,  that is surrounded by several poorer countries ,spends millions of dollars to protect its boundaries and prevent drug smugglers from coming to its land. only by helping less fortunate world ,we can live in a prosperous and peaceful society and  at the same time reducing  the gap between poor and rich  countries.

In conclusion, despite whatever advantages there may be with  focusing only on our countries development  its disadvantages far outweigh (outnumber) the advantages. To put it another way, it is more conducive to share the wealth with unprivileged nations than to be selfish and live in isolation from needy communities .

وهذه القوالب كماهي بدون امثله

1-(Advantages and disadvantages essay template )

In the (contemporary) society, there have been widespread discussions about … and various arguments have been put forward.. Indeed such debates have sometimes resulted in acrimonious or rancorous discussion .Whilst a large number of advocates may strenuously argue that …, their adversaries may claim otherwise.  Considering the numerous arguments made, I would (strongly; to some extent; in general) hold that there are both advantages and disadvantages, the most important of which are as follows.

First and foremost, with regard to the advantages it is seen that …

In other words, …

To put it precisely, …

In addition (Furthermore; Moreover), …

For example, One other hand , we should not be oblivious of the downsides associated with  eg modern technology . Take sth , sth has made possible for ,,,to ,,,,,,,,,,

In summary, as discussed above, the advantages of … primarily include … while the disadvantages are … These are the main aspects people should consider carefully when dealing with these issues in addition to other less important factors that may also be stressed.

2- ( Argumentative essay template )

In the modern (contemporary) society , there have been widespread discussions about (Topic )… and various arguments have been put forward. Indeed such debates have sometimes resulted in acrimonious or rancorous discussions  .Whilst a large number of advocates may strenuously argue that (+)…, their adversaries may claim otherwise .Considering the numerous arguments made, I would (strongly; to some extent; in general) hold that (your opinion )………My argument is supported by the following reasons

First and foremost,

In other words, …

To put it precisely, …

In addition (Furthermore; Moreover), …

For example, …

Another instance is that …

Last but not least, …

According to a recent study, …

Conclusion for both view essay  in case the topic is to discuss two points of view .

To summarize  our discussion so far , there are two divergent views related to this issue .One is that ……………. While the other is that ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,. Taking into account of both sides of the argument, I am more inclined to hold that ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.

Conclusion NO; 1  for argumentative essay

To conclude our discussion so far , we cannot accept that …………. .Instead , I would like to reiterate that ……………………. (To put it another way, it is more conducive (beneficial) to … than to …)

Conclusion  No 2 for argumentative essay

  1. There are 2 conclusions for argumentative essays and you should choose the one that matches best with the given topic .

In conclusion, despite whatever advantages there may be with…, its disadvantages far outweigh (outnumber) the advantages. To put it another way, it is more conducive (beneficial) to … than to …

3- (Problem and solution template essay)

     In the modern (contemporary) society, there have been widespread discussions about … and various arguments have been put forward. Indeed such debates have sometimes resulted in acrimonious or rancorous discussion .Whilst a large number of advocates may strenuously argue that …, their adversaries may claim otherwise.  Considering the numerous arguments made, I would (strongly; to some extent; in general) hold that sth  has/have resulted in a wide range of problems .The main problems as follows.

First and foremost, …..

In other words, …

To put it precisely, …

In addition (Furthermore; Moreover), …

For example, …

Another instance is that …

Based on the problem and the reasons that have led to these problems, the most effective and efficient way to solve the problem is ……… Besides, we can also consider ……

To conclude ,given the causes and solutions discussed previously ,as long as concerted efforts are made on an international level to combat this issue ,the ……( problem)…………………………..will be reduced  or even eliminated completely.

هناك مميزات لهذه القوالب وهذه من ابرزها من وجهة نظري :

وهناك الكثير من المزايا التي سوف يلاحظها الطالب بنفسه وهذا لايعني ان هذه القوالب ليس لديها عيوب.

هذه بعض النصايح العامة بخصوص الكتابة وبعضها بخصوص هذه القوالب

  1. لذلك انصح كل متقدم للايتلس وهو قريب من الدرجة بان يتدرب على هذه القوالب ويحفظها حفظا تاما حتى يستخدمها اثناء الاختبار بسهولة تامة وباذن الله سيكون الفرق جليا وهذه القوالب لاتحتاج لاكثر من اسبوع للتدرب عليها وعمل اختبارات تجريبيه عليها

2- ايضا احبتي نصيحة للكتابة بشكل عام وهي من افضل الطرق وهي بان تستخلص بعض الجمل والعبارات الجميلة اثناء قراءتك لاي كتاب باللغة الانجليزيه  وتدوينها في دفترك الخاص ومن ثم استخدامها وتوظيفها بالشكل الذي تريد على سبيل المثال هذه الجمله

The issue of smoking must be tackled head-on  = in a direct and determined way

بمعني ان كلمة smoking   تستطيع ان تستبدلها باي موضوع او مشكلة اخرى وهذا فقط  مجرد مثال

3- دايما حاول ان تستبدل الكلمات الشايعة والمعروفه لدى اغلب الناس بكلمات اقل شبوعا حتى تبين للمصحح بان مستواك عالي حتى وان هذا غير صحيح , بمعنى اخر حاول تتفلسف في اختيارك للكلمات حتى وان كنت غير مقتنع بذلك لان هذه من اسس تقييم هذا الاختبار  , والطريقة التي كنت استخدمها هي وضع قسم في دفتري الخاص للكلمات الجديده التي اريدها ان تحل محل الكلمات القديمة واقراها من فنرة لاخرى , وهناك طريقة اخرى وهي ان تحلل كتاباتك وتلاحظ الكلمات التي دائما تستخدمها وتبحث عن بديل اقوى لها وعادتا تكون البدائل متوفرة في القواميس خصوصا قواميس المترادفات والمتظادات او ان تستشير شخص مستواه عالي في اللغه حتى يقدم لك بعض البدائل لكلماتك المتكرره  ,و هذه بعض الامثلة من دفتري الخاص

Mainly = predominantly

Require= entail

Something plays an important role = plays a far more significant

Use= employ

Generally= by and large

Many = an array of sth , an impressive number of ,phenomenal number of sth, a host of sth

Similar = identical

وغيرها الكثير فقط هذه  مجرد امثلة والفكرة هي استخدام كلمات اقل شيوعا بدلا من كلماتنا الشايعه والمعروفه .

ثانيا : القراءة

لاشك ان مهارة القراءة تعد من اصعب المهارات لدينا كطلاب عرب ولدينا ضعف واضح في هذا الجانب  مقارنتا ببقية الطلاب وهناك الكثير من الكتب التي تساعد الطلاب على اكتساب مهارات القراءة والتركيز عليها , ومن وجهة نظري ومن تجربة شخصية اعتقد ان افضل كتاب للقراءة للتحضير لاختبار IELTS  وهو كتاب يحمل العنوان “Improve your IELTS Reading Skills ” للكاتبين    Sam McCarter and Norman Whitby  وانصح كل طالب لديه ضعف في مهارات القراءة باقتناء هذا الكتاب .

من مميزات هذا الكتاب انه مخصص للIELTS  , ايضا يمكنك تعلم متى تقرا بسرعه ومتى تقرا ببطء ومن اين تبدا وكيف تبدا وكلها مهارات كانت غايبة عني شخصيا فتجد ان بعض الاشخاص او المعلمين ينصحونك بقراءة المقدمة ومن ثم الاسئلة والبعض يقترح قراءة سطرين الى ثلاثة اسطر من كل مقطع الخ ومثل هذا التشويش يجعل الطالب في حيرة ويضيق وقتة وماله ويوثر على نفسية الطالب وتحصيله  , بفضل الله ثم بفضل هذا الكتاب ارتفعت درجتي في القراءة من 6 الى 7 في غضون شهر  وكنت دايما اجد صعوبة في تخطي حاجز ال6 بل وايضا انهيت الاختبار ولازال هناك حوالي الثلاث دقايق اضافيه  وهذا لم يحدث من قبل ابدا .

كيفية الاستفادة من هذا الكتاب

 هنا ملخص للاستراتيجيات  الموجودة في هذا الكتاب  القيم لمن لايستطيع الحصول عليه

Techinques for reading skills in IELTS :

First we should know what scan and skim mean :

SCAN is looking over the text to find one word or phrase , not to understand the whole text .Here are some helpful suggestion for this skill .

Skimming is to extract ( get) the meaning or topic of a text without looking at all words .As you may know that reading texts in IELTS are  not meant to be studied ,so just get the main idea by reading quickly .

The first thing you should do when dealing with IELTS reading texts

Read the title and skim the questions first .Use the information from theses to predict the content of the reading passage . remember that the questions are a summary of the passage .

Theses are helpful tips and are classified according to the type of the question

Techniques for True /False /Not given question

Techniques for sentence completion question

Techniques for sentence completion( matching endings )question

Techniques for a labeling a diagram question

Techniques for a match heading question

  1. skim the headings to form a general idea of the topic .Note repeated words
  2. Identify and underline the organizing words in the headings .Look for connections and logical ordering between the organizing words . Organizing words are like problems, reasons , effects , consequence , belief and so on
  3. Make predictions about which paragraph each each heading relates to
  4. Skim read the paragraph to check your predictions and complete matching
  5. Check your answers by reading your headings in orders

Techniques for summary with wordlist question

  1. scan the text for the section which relates to the summary .
  2. skim the summary and try to complete the spaces with your own words .
  3. look for words/ ideas from the list that collocate with words in the text.
  4. Find words/ phrases in the list which are opposites .Find words that you can eliminate from the list .
  5. Read the relevant section of the text and complete the answers.

Techniques for matching names question

  1. Scan the passage for each name in the list
  2. Draw a box around each name . This limits where you need to look for their findings ( opinions ,claims , etc )
  3. skim to see whether the person’s findings occur before or after their names .Then read the findings
  4. read down the list of statements to find the correct match

Techniques for multiple-choice  question :

Techniques for short answer question :

Techniques for matching phrases  question :

Techniques for YES /NO/ NOT GIVEN   question :

الاستماع :

يعتبر قسم الاستماع في اختبار IELTS الاسهل نسبيا مقارنتا ببقية المهارات الاخرى  واعتقد ان الحصول على درجة 7 او 8 ليس بالامر الصعب وهذه بعض الاستراتيجيات التي اتبعتها واتت بالنتايج المرضية ولله الحمد :

اولا : معرفة الكلمات الشايعه في اللغة الانجليزية  نطقا وكتابتا وهي موجودة في قاموس

” Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English 5th edition “

وهذا القاموس موجود في معظم المكتبات وايضا تستطيع الحصول عليه من apple store

فهذه الكلمات تمثل 86 في المئة من الكلمات التي يستخدمها متحدثي اللغة الانجليزية الاصلية ( المصدر هو القاموس نفسه ) وهي ليست بالامر الصعب لان لان نصف هذه الكلمات معروفه مسبقا  تقريبا لاي طالب قد حصل على درجة  مابين 4 و 5 , لذلك فقط تحتاج الى مرور سريع .  ايضا يوجد في القاموس ايقونه  خاصه لهذه الكلمات وتستطيع الاستماع الى النطق الامريكي والبريطاني , والذي كنت افعله عادتا هو الاستماع للكلمة من دون النظر اليها ثم كتابتهاومن ثم انظر هل الكلمة مطابقة لما سمعت وايضا هل هي صحيحة املائيا  اذا لا اكتب هذه الكلمة في دفتري الخاص حتى يتم التركيز عليها مستقبلا, ومراجعتها مرتين كفيلة باذن الله ان تكتبها بشكل صحيح مدى الحياة , ومعرفتك بهذه نطقا وكتابة سيرفع من درجتك وسيصبح الحصول على درجة من 6 الى 7 سهلة جدا جدا.بالاضافه الى ان اتقانك لنطق هذه الكلمات سيرفع من درجة اختبار التحدث . واكتشفت الكثير من الكلمات البسيطة التي كنت انطقها بشكل خاطي لفترات طويلة والله المستعان .فيما يتعلق بالاخطاء الاملائية هذه بعض الامثلة على كلمات كتبتها بشكل خاطي في البداية ومن ثم دونتها ولازلت اتذكرها الى الان لانها اتت  في اختبار ال IELTS   وغيرها الكثير .

Statistics , contribute ,  sandwich

ثانيا : معرفة كتابة الايام والشهور  لانها تتكرر كثيرا فلذلك لاتستحق ان تضيع درجة بسببها لان كما تعلمون ان 3 اخطاء تحسب بنصف باند فهم جدا التنبه لمثل هذه الامور .

ثالثا : معرفة كتابة الاسماء  والارقام بالشكل الصحيح وبسرعه لان الاختبار خصوصا اول جزء يكون عادتا محادثه بين شخص عادي ومقدم خدمة ويحتاج لبيانات المتصل , وهناك كتاب اسمه

 ” 202 useful exercises for IELTS ” فيه الكثير من التدريبات على التهجية وعلى الارقام وياتي مع الكتاب CD  للاستماع الى الارقام والحروف , لان كما تعلمون اخوتي الكرام بان هناك حروف في اللغة الانجليزية لاتوجد في اللغة العربيه وهذه تسبب مشكلة مثل v , J ,p  وعادتا كانت مشكلة بالنسبة الي , ايضا الارقام فهناك فرق بسيط في لفظ الارقام من 13-19  و 30-90 .

رابعا : عمل اختبارات تجريبية ومن ثم تحليل الاخطاء ومعالجتها مستقبلا ان امكن .

خامسا : اخذ عبارات من النص الكتابي للمقطع ” transcript”   واستخدامها في حياتك اليومية حتي تتطور مهارة التحدث .لان الاستماع بشكل دوري  يودي الى تطور التحدث كما ان القراءة تساعد في تطور الكتابة .

التحدث :

النصايح بهذا الخصوص موجودة في عدة كتب من اهمها

Target Band 7

101 Useful Hints for IELTS

فقط لدي ملاحظتين وهي

وقبل كل شي اوصيكم ونفسي  بالتوكل على الله والاستغفار فان الله ييسر به كل عسير ويفرج به كل هم , وأسال الله لكم التوفيق والسداد اينما كنتم وان يجعل اعمالنا واعمالكم في طاعته وخالصة لوجهه الكريم .

وفي الختام احب ان اشير الى ان هذه النصايح والامثلة قد تحتوي على بعض الاخطاء والانسان غير معصوم فان كان من خطا فهو مني ومن الشيطان وان كان من صواب فهو من الله وحده ,  والحمد لله والصلاة والسلام على رسول الله .

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